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Order of location

1/11/2016

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I'm at my house and I want to go to my favourite place so I'm going to tell you how to get there. First you get comfortable place and close your eyes and think of you in a place under your bed and its called...CANDY LAND and every thing is candy. This is what it looks like to me, the trees are made of of chocolate and cotten candy, the water is syrup and so on. I love this place because I love candy and it helps me if I'm stressed or angry. I hope this helps you to and this place is very nice and you can eat what you like.
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Ms. Bains
1/11/2016 11:26:59 am

Well done writing using order of location to organize your writing. Please use transition words when writing and include the descriptive words for order of location such as above, below, beneath and so on.

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